Deviation Actions
Literature Text
The scene opens with Francisco eating his lunch at the stands when he reaches for his helmet he sees the note Lynn left for him.
Francisco: [Confused] Huh, what’s this? [Picks it up and reads it, looking uncomfortable as he does.]
Random Player: Hey, Francisco, game’s starting.
Francisco: Uh, coming! [Puts the note away and gets his helmet on, heading to the diamond]
French Narrator: One game later…
[Francisco is sitting at a table in the lunchroom, mindlessly tapping the tip onto the paper, looking depressed]
Sam: [Comes up to him] Hey little bro, how’s it hanging?
Francisco: [Surprised, he looks up to her][Absent-mindedly] Oh, hey Sam…
Sam: [Concerned, she sits next to him] Hey, you okay Francisco?
Francisco: [Sighs sadly] No, not really… someone pulled a mean prank on me earlier—
Sam: WHAT?! [Gets up, astounded][Infuriated] Who did it?! I’ll protest! I’ll sue! Then I’ll rip their lungs out!
Francisco: No, Sam, you’d don’t understand.
Sam: [Confused] What are you talking about? David’s been studying up on medical stuff; he can just put them back.
Francisco: No, it’s not that. [Takes out the note] It’s a fake love letter, that’s all.
Sam: [Confused, she takes the note, and starts to read it]
Deep Desires- Chapter one-
Birth of the Genie
Jasmine's new Life
Here was an idea for a story that and I discussed and I really liked. The basic idea is that all the all the Love Interests from "L Is For Love" are actually one big family, and that after Francisco gets his letter, he feels it's just a prank due to his self-esteem issues. So, his siblings band together to not only get their brother feeling better, but find who gave him the love letter and help him get with his secret admirer *coughs* Lynn *coughs*.
So far, I think I did a good job at portraying Francisco and Sam, but... I'm not entirely sure. You guys let me know what you think below!
Also, just to warn, this might be put on hold for a while so I can focus on other works.